Post by Elijah Derlin on Jun 29, 2008 19:13:28 GMT -5
northern downpour sends its love
elijah ryan derlin-17, junior at Lording's + _______{girl, LM kid, junior or sophomore}
the end of the plot? Love
Elijah Ryan was a talented kid. He knew it. He also had money. He also knew that. He is overall very friendly, but only towards his friends. He'll talk to strangers, but only if there is one, and they seem interested in something he's doing.
He's rude to jerks and fakes. But there's one type of person he hates the most, and is rudest to.
Who? The Lucy Madison kids.
He is a victim of prejudice. He didn't even go to middle school with them. He went to a private middle school with good musical studies. None of the LM kids went there. He's harbored the prejudice against them, against the peasants, as they were called a long time ago. The commoners, even, they could be called. Anything but people that had money and would always have money. The ones that had no money and no talent.
Eli always hated the Lucy Madison kids. He thinks that NONE of them have money, and that NONE of them have ANY talent. He can tell, oddly enough, who is a Lucy Madison kid and who is a Lording's student. He hasn't been wrong yet.
...but then he meets ________ She's very pretty, in his eyes. She has a loving personality, doesn't do drugs, doesn't drink alcohol, doesn't sleep around. She's talented even. She seems to him a good image of a Lording's kid. Guess what? She isn't. She goes to Lucy Madison. He doesn't know that. Because she is younger than him, he probably wouldn't see her even if she went to Lording's.
They become close, really good friends. They begin to feel more than friendship towards each other. Love. One day, under the winter sun, they finally reveal their feelings, and start to date each other. They are very happy. However, in spring, ________ finally reveals that doesn't go to Lording's; she goes to Lucy Madison. Infuriated, Eli breaks their relationship, telling her that he never wants to see her again, that she deceived him, which is untrue. He assumed it.
Three weeks go by, and Eli is greatly saddened by everything. She is too. She is more depressed than Eli, and sends him a text message. It says
Eli was horrified. This didn't seem like the girl Eli knew. Okay, so she wasn't little miss perfect, she had her fits, her problems. But she didn't seem the person to commit suicide. Because of him, no less. She wasn't even a cutter. She wasn't like that.
Eli quickly ran to _________'s house. He banged on the door quickly. When her father answered the door, angry, he pushed by him, running into the house. He knew the house, knew her room. He ran to it, but found nothing there. He ran into the bathroom; nothing. In an act of desperation, he climbed into the attic, their favorite hiding place. That's where he found her. She lay collapsed on the floor, just as beautiful as she'd always been. He realized this now.
He yelled for her family, and she was taken to the hospital. Eli followed, but he seemed only a shell of what was before. He was pale, with streaks of tears on his face, remnants of them. Luckily, she had lived. A bat from the attic flew in for the night, and frightened _______, causing her to miss any vital organs, and she stabbed herself on the fleshy area between the chest and shoulder. She lost a lot of blood, though, causing her to faint from it. It was lucky that Eli had found her, though, else she would've lost too much blood.
It was then, as he saw her on the floor, seemingly dead, that he realized he really did love her. It didn't matter what school she went to. She was everything he had ever wanted. He also realized the rivalry was extremely stupid. He loved her, and didn't want her to leave him ever, ever again. Although, technically, he left her. But we won't get into that.
Mk, so I need the girl. I want someone who is an active RPer, and can post at LEAST 3 paragraphs a post. More is better. I realize that the plot is sorta crazy, yes, but it would be necessary for him, because he's that darn stubborn. True love conquers all, as they say. This is a showing of that. I can probably change SOME things, but for him to realize his love, she has to do something drastic.
Here is a timeline for the events
Meet--autumn//around nowish
Reveal Feelings--this winter//when I decide it's winter
Breakup--spring//early to mid//when I decide it's spring
True Love?--spring//three weeks after breakup//uhm...three days after finishing the breakup thread....
elijah ryan derlin-17, junior at Lording's + _______{girl, LM kid, junior or sophomore}
the end of the plot? Love
Elijah Ryan was a talented kid. He knew it. He also had money. He also knew that. He is overall very friendly, but only towards his friends. He'll talk to strangers, but only if there is one, and they seem interested in something he's doing.
He's rude to jerks and fakes. But there's one type of person he hates the most, and is rudest to.
Who? The Lucy Madison kids.
He is a victim of prejudice. He didn't even go to middle school with them. He went to a private middle school with good musical studies. None of the LM kids went there. He's harbored the prejudice against them, against the peasants, as they were called a long time ago. The commoners, even, they could be called. Anything but people that had money and would always have money. The ones that had no money and no talent.
Eli always hated the Lucy Madison kids. He thinks that NONE of them have money, and that NONE of them have ANY talent. He can tell, oddly enough, who is a Lucy Madison kid and who is a Lording's student. He hasn't been wrong yet.
...but then he meets ________ She's very pretty, in his eyes. She has a loving personality, doesn't do drugs, doesn't drink alcohol, doesn't sleep around. She's talented even. She seems to him a good image of a Lording's kid. Guess what? She isn't. She goes to Lucy Madison. He doesn't know that. Because she is younger than him, he probably wouldn't see her even if she went to Lording's.
They become close, really good friends. They begin to feel more than friendship towards each other. Love. One day, under the winter sun, they finally reveal their feelings, and start to date each other. They are very happy. However, in spring, ________ finally reveals that doesn't go to Lording's; she goes to Lucy Madison. Infuriated, Eli breaks their relationship, telling her that he never wants to see her again, that she deceived him, which is untrue. He assumed it.
Three weeks go by, and Eli is greatly saddened by everything. She is too. She is more depressed than Eli, and sends him a text message. It says
Eli....I love you. I love you so much. I don't get what your problem against Lucy Madison is, but I've always loved you. From the start, I did.
But three weeks ago...my heart broke. It broke by your hands, by your voice. And yet, I still couldn't help but love you. I can't stand the fact that I can no longer see you, no longer talk to you. I hate you, and yet I love you. I hate you for what you did to me, of what you are unknowingly about to do. But I still love you.
Eli. I'm going to die. You pushed me to it. I loved you, but you still held that prejudice over that fact. What we had was amazing. Don't try and stop me, Eli. I know you'd never even touch me. You wouldn't even come to my funeral.
I'm sure that you'd love to know how I'll die, so you'll never see my face again. I'm going to be a little Juliet. Except I'm not Juliet, we were never Romeo and Juliet, apparently. I'm Juliet, but there is no Romeo. It'll be at my house. I'm sure you'll come just to laugh at my face. Don't bother coming, you've hurt me enough. Goodbye, Eli.
But three weeks ago...my heart broke. It broke by your hands, by your voice. And yet, I still couldn't help but love you. I can't stand the fact that I can no longer see you, no longer talk to you. I hate you, and yet I love you. I hate you for what you did to me, of what you are unknowingly about to do. But I still love you.
Eli. I'm going to die. You pushed me to it. I loved you, but you still held that prejudice over that fact. What we had was amazing. Don't try and stop me, Eli. I know you'd never even touch me. You wouldn't even come to my funeral.
I'm sure that you'd love to know how I'll die, so you'll never see my face again. I'm going to be a little Juliet. Except I'm not Juliet, we were never Romeo and Juliet, apparently. I'm Juliet, but there is no Romeo. It'll be at my house. I'm sure you'll come just to laugh at my face. Don't bother coming, you've hurt me enough. Goodbye, Eli.
Eli was horrified. This didn't seem like the girl Eli knew. Okay, so she wasn't little miss perfect, she had her fits, her problems. But she didn't seem the person to commit suicide. Because of him, no less. She wasn't even a cutter. She wasn't like that.
Eli quickly ran to _________'s house. He banged on the door quickly. When her father answered the door, angry, he pushed by him, running into the house. He knew the house, knew her room. He ran to it, but found nothing there. He ran into the bathroom; nothing. In an act of desperation, he climbed into the attic, their favorite hiding place. That's where he found her. She lay collapsed on the floor, just as beautiful as she'd always been. He realized this now.
He yelled for her family, and she was taken to the hospital. Eli followed, but he seemed only a shell of what was before. He was pale, with streaks of tears on his face, remnants of them. Luckily, she had lived. A bat from the attic flew in for the night, and frightened _______, causing her to miss any vital organs, and she stabbed herself on the fleshy area between the chest and shoulder. She lost a lot of blood, though, causing her to faint from it. It was lucky that Eli had found her, though, else she would've lost too much blood.
It was then, as he saw her on the floor, seemingly dead, that he realized he really did love her. It didn't matter what school she went to. She was everything he had ever wanted. He also realized the rivalry was extremely stupid. He loved her, and didn't want her to leave him ever, ever again. Although, technically, he left her. But we won't get into that.
Mk, so I need the girl. I want someone who is an active RPer, and can post at LEAST 3 paragraphs a post. More is better. I realize that the plot is sorta crazy, yes, but it would be necessary for him, because he's that darn stubborn. True love conquers all, as they say. This is a showing of that. I can probably change SOME things, but for him to realize his love, she has to do something drastic.
Here is a timeline for the events
Meet--autumn//around nowish
Reveal Feelings--this winter//when I decide it's winter
Breakup--spring//early to mid//when I decide it's spring
True Love?--spring//three weeks after breakup//uhm...three days after finishing the breakup thread....